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luvrsnliers4ever
05-06-2006, 06:31 PM
Look at me
I'm not to blame
I missed you so
Don't know my name

Im not real
to you im dead
I cut for you
not deep but i bled

I hide my scars
thyre plain in sight
theyre white and angry
this isnt right

I still dont know
if you care
But ill try
I love you i swear

please rate this poem i wrote it yesterday after my bf broke up with me in art

smells_like_failure
05-06-2006, 10:49 PM
I feel for u its hard breaking up.But I liked it! It can use some work and all but it was good.