POEM NO 1:
They took each other hand in hand
as they walked along the golden sand
he said "i love you"
she said it too
their eyes stuck to each other as if by glue
as they stared she said "goodbye"
the guy looked shocked and asked her "why?"
"you need to move on" she had said
the guy got angry and suddenly red
"i dont wanna move on" he said very mad
"i know said the girl" nodding, looking sad
"i love you, you're beautiful, your my whole life!
and one day i'll ask you to be my wife!!
"i love you too" she said, lowering her head
"and i'd marry you too, if i wasn't dead....."


POEM NO 2:
you know that i am all alone
as i waited for you alongside the phone
but you never rang, you didnt call
you were too busy to care at all,
what u said was a horrible lie
and as i waited,i started to cry
why wont you answer when i ring you?
whats so important that you have to do?
and so dear friend, i've had enough...
its too hard to smile and try to act tough
you have driven me round the bend,
and so it's our friendship that i must end....

I liked the first one.

i love the first one omgosh such a great poem

tanx
keep it coming ppl!

I like both of them..there is something that is not quite right about the but i can't put my finger on it...don't get me wrong they are good, especially the first one. It makes something serious sound trivial and thus the ending is a shock which works well..
xxtatxx

kool, thanks