i wrote a poem ages ago about a girl i saw (the love we shared) this is the second part.

finally I get,
My long dying wish,
Of being with you.

Never have I,
Been so in love,
Never thought I could.

Amazing,
How one joke,
Can change things,
So drastically.

Its been said in the past,
Now I feel the need to repeat,
Its as if, you walked straight passed,
A second glance and you were gone,
Out of my life,
I will never,
Love another again.

The line breaks seem a bit off..

how so ?