This is probably dorky but tell me what you think and how I can improve it, please.

I hate this world in which I live,
Its taken all I've got to give.
Picked me up and threw me down.
Lets me scream but with no sound,
Locked bitterness of pain inside.
In my mind I try to hide,
from me or you I do not know
I only wish you'd let me go.
I want this world to set me free.
I want this world to swallow me.
Then spit me up so I can fly
with angel wings beyond the sky.
No more hurt and no more pain.
Let me off this trackless train,
Before I ask myself why.
Why so young I wish to die.

thats deep i like it ..not corny at all my poem is just like thatttt its about the pain and hardships and loneliness that your going thru

nice job

Thanks a lot, I'll have to look up your poem.