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fox chick
03-11-2004, 05:55 PM
it takes alot of guts to trust
everytime you backstab me its
just another cut
ive heard all your lies
but it just cuts deeper
the more you l;ie the more
you loose your trust
i cant do this
i know you told me
they arnt lies
but its hard to believe
but hard to leave you
every cut goes deeper
and deeper
i try to forget the lies
but they always find
a way to fly back
theyre all scars now
youre far from getting
your trust back


*tell me what you think.. fix it if you think its bad*

Iris
03-11-2004, 09:31 PM
i didnt really read it all..it didnt get my attention. I just lately I've been more into rhyming and it does rhyme just not that well put together