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fox chick
03-11-2004, 04:13 PM
i took a knife
held it in my hand.
put it agianst my skin.
made a cut
in the shape of a x.
i have to proove....
i can take pain
i need to bleed
to know
im still alive.
i need to cut to
show i can take the pain.
the pain thats with me everyday.
the pain that'll never go away.
i need to see the blood
gush down my arms.
as i watch the blood drip
its like watching my problems drip away.
my problems are just scars now.



*TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK*

Flirting With Suicide
03-11-2004, 04:18 PM
hrm

I like the meaning of it........but the flow I dunno.........

but its good

Laura122190
03-14-2004, 12:27 PM
its good...but are u suicidal?? i mean w/e .. talk to me on Laura122190

fox chick
03-16-2004, 05:52 PM
yeah im sucidal...

Destiny
03-17-2004, 08:17 PM
dont be, it's really good, and I get you.

punk_rock_463
03-20-2004, 02:39 PM
i like it... sounds like something i would write