i just needa put some feelings out here....what do you all think?
i was havin a REALLY bad night so i wrote this


I feel lonesome in my mind
Sometimes this world is far from kind
I try desperately to drift away
Can’t find a reason why I would stay
This pain, this pain is just so real.

My smiles hide the painful tears
Outside I’m happy inside I fear
I’m bored with all that’s come to me
My world is gone there’s nothing to see
This pain, this pain is just so real.

The way my name rolls off your tongue
The way that living once was fun
Now all the good times are gone for good
If I could change this world I would
This pain, this pain is just so real.

Silence rings throughout my ears
Shadows of fury linger and leer
The nothingness i've come to know
It does not leave through rain and snow
This pain, this pain is just so real.

Do you ever feel like god doesn’t exist?
Because why would he create anger and fists.
Why would he let your life come undone?
To be alone like you’re the only one.
This pain, this pain is just so real.

You make me cry,
Cause me to lie,
Why do you pry?
Don’t want to try,
This pain is real,
Nothing you’ll feel,
Because you see
Immaturity
Just a child
Irresponsible and wild,
And when I'm away,
You will say,
She is all grown up now . . . .

Even though i dont like you...it was well written. Good job.

thanks..even though i dont like you either

That's really good, exquistitely written. It shows a lot of emotion.