As I lay here in your arms
About to take my last breath
Loving you more and more
Even though your the one who caused all this
I pleaded you not to
But you drank and then you drove
And now my life is slowly ending all because you you.

Why did you do this?
Was our love not strong enough?
I did so much for you, did I now?
Do I deserve this?
Why do I still love you?
After all this,
I'm still going to remembering you.

Don't forget me
Be happy and live a good life
Get on with it, with happy memories of us both
Tell me Mum I'm sorry I lied, and that I'll love and miss her all the time
Tell me Dad, I'm sorry for the rudeness, and that I love him too much
Tell my brother thanks for everything, I love him so much, miss him too much
And now I tell you, I'll remember you through everything we've been through, I'll never stop loving you.

What do you guys think?? I know it's not that good but just want your opinions! :D

I know some people have checked this thread out, now it's time to reply and tel me what you think...

Yes go on...your so close to clicking (I hope)

Very good! ...i envy you!


~Peace hold with you~

It's very good right, shame I didn't write it my mate did, she posted it up here not me :P