She put a knife in my heart,
Feels like she's been doing this from the start.
Wanting her, missing her,
Feel like kissing her.
How much longer will this be,
To wait for the person just for me.
The person that means most to me,
Is now only part of my memory.
Leaves her locket in my pocket,
So I will know she doesn't want it.
What can I do to make this better,
Nothing, cause she wont except my next letter.
Loving her for who she was,
Hating me for who I am.
What to do while I wait,
Cry, by night and by day.
Feels like this wont pass what can i say,
When it feels like the someone you love just passed away.
Where's my love when I need her most,
Buried inthe past with all the ghosts.

I love it.

no one likes my poem?

Eh. I'm just not a big fan of poems about being let down by your significant other. Besides that, this just doesn't flow well. Try reading it aloud to identify the places that need a little smoothing.

It's emo-tastic.

And as the person stated above, it doesn't flow that well. It really is lacking structure.

It wasn't all that great. A little to emo for my tastes and had no structure.