another attempt at poetry....

~Just Once~
just once i wanna kno ur there,
just once i wanna kno u care,
you said u loved me, u said it was tru,
but in the end you were just bein you,
you lied && cheated,
swore && ran,
&& now ur jelouse i have another man.
just once was all i asked for,
just once i wanted to kno && hear,
that u wud b there to comfort me,
but instead u brought me fear.

comments wud b appreciated,
thanx

i like that poem alot

thanx

i like it
its pretty gud