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mall-35
02-13-2006, 06:54 PM
hey i wrote this poem is it a good V-day poem or should i toss it to the curb: :pink:
what is love but a lustful feeling
what is love but a restless mind
do you say i love you with a kiss good night or the solitude of a weary mind
what is love but a willing heart
what is love do you say sweetheart
love is more then a passing glance its a wonderful feeling
the birds call or the dove's coo
what is love but a passing moment spent with you
all i know is i love you :pink: :pink:

angelique_10
02-13-2006, 06:55 PM
I like the hearts at the end.

mall-35
02-13-2006, 07:02 PM
;] hee thanx ;]

angelic_chick
02-13-2006, 07:07 PM
I like the hearts at the end.

Me too. It gives it something a little extra.

mall-35
02-13-2006, 07:18 PM
;] thanx believe it or not i wrote it myself ;]

angelic_chick
02-13-2006, 07:22 PM
You don't know sarcasm when it stares at your face. :shifty:

mall-35
02-13-2006, 07:25 PM
okay i re read it i didn't catch it the first time sorry. :m00p:

angelic_chick
02-13-2006, 07:28 PM
Goody. :)

mall-35
02-13-2006, 07:40 PM
uh

mall-35
02-13-2006, 07:41 PM
"rolleyes"

Martel
02-15-2006, 02:37 PM
I like the hearts at the end.
I don't even like the hearts, making the whole thing the worst post in the history of teenspot.

fragile_poet_pie
02-19-2006, 02:32 AM
i luv u too

mall-35
03-02-2006, 07:03 PM
Screw u matel