You can only masturbate for so long
Until it gets forced and stale
Now, isn't that right, honey?
I'll be underneath the bed when you're ready.

You can only lie to yourself for so long
Until it becomes too real
Cry me a river, I'll drink all your tears
I'm dehydrated on love and I'm ready to kill you.

ch: I drowned you in a bottle of alcohol
Left you wilting on the nightstand
Easy days get better with tylenol

I sang you a song of rejection
But you blocked your ears for too many years
My dear, you're my greatest deception

God, I'm trying so hard to sound smart here
But you know I'm less than perfect
Now, don't you adore me, darling?
Or would you rather I replace myself with a memory.

Desperation takes the place of understanding
I would do anything to figure you out
I'l give you a light, you give me a story
I'll blow out your candle...we'll call it a night.

ch: I drowned you in a bottle of alcohol
Left you wilting on the nightstand
Easy days get better with tylenol

I sang you a song of rejection
But you blocked your ears for too many years
My dear, you're my greatest deception

xxx

Yeah, I think I liked that one. =)

Thank you.

I honestly just like the chorus. I don't know what to do with the verses.

xxx

I love the chorus <3 also

Cry me a river, I'll drink all your tears
I'm dehydrated on love and I'm ready to kill you.

hmmm

good or bad hmmm, Duncs?

i could masturbate all day long and not get bored


so its a bad hmm ;]

and its a hmmm that lisa is awake at 20 to 5 in the morning, crazy!

Originally posted by Duncan
i could masturbate all day long and not get bored


so its a bad hmm ;]

K.

Oh, thanks for the nice comments, guys. I want to re-work the verses a little but I like the chorus.

xxx

Yeah, the chorus is really awesome. Great imagery. The thing is, this is kinda funny, but I thought that the first verse was about a vibrator.

The rest of it seems pretty good to me. I don't know what I'd suggest for any of the verses. You appeared to have gotten your point across.