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Ashleypoo07
02-17-2004, 08:36 PM
As much as you deny this,
I need you to realize,
Your not the only one hurting,
And YES someone cares.
maybe someone can relate to this...


I have preayed for you,
Time after time
I've cryed for you
And begged for you...

Just let me Love you,
Let me be bigger part of your life.

I dont think you realize
What you mean to me.
And i Hate to see you hurtin
And upset

I know you have been thru alot
In your past whole life!
But things can be different.
That is, IF you alow them.

And as your friend,
I feel failure,
Like i could have done more.

So once again I'll pray for you
Longing tears run fown mt cheek
Begging to please,
Just let me Love you.

hello kitty princess
02-17-2004, 09:26 PM
i liked it..about a boy?

Ashleypoo07
02-18-2004, 08:58 PM
yep its about a guy, :( but ya neway i really have no idea how i accomplished this mistake....
"As much as you deny this,
I need you to realize,
Your not the only one hurting,
And YES someone cares."
'maybe someone can relate to this...' <<<<<<<<<<<<< that wasnt suppposed to be right there.. lol

shinnystar160
02-18-2004, 10:16 PM
I like it...It made me cry

shinnystar160
02-18-2004, 10:17 PM
my honey is on the phone....ah

Insomniac-x
02-19-2004, 10:02 AM
Dont forget to proof read your work.... "Longing tears run fown mt cheek" It's very good though =) I liked it :)

Ashleypoo07
02-19-2004, 09:38 PM
Oh, hehe thanks... didnt realize those typos!!