I know this isn't talent....nor is it creative, ..not sure if its a song or a poem...i just wrote it ..so...enjoy...

Dark grey clouds
drape the sky
You lose your voice
and close your eyes

You lay your hand
upon your chest
but no one hears
your call of distress

you're eyes fill
with rivers of tears
you cant believe
its been 15 years

Its hard to face
all the thoughts
you see his face
and you're distraught

you place the flowers
in a basket
with a picture
on the casket

you place a kiss
on his head
cold and pale
he lays there dead

as you slowly rise
to walk away
you open your eyes
and lie awake

You find him
he's still alive
you stare at him
eye to eye

You tell him
you really care
its all your love
you'd want to share

Just remember this
when you see your friends
what if today
it was the end

wow, thats some great stuff:D, my only change is to maybe add some small words near the end of the poem because they got shorter at the end and it didn't sound as good as the first part, but overall, its great, IMO, i'd say its your best one yet, keep up the good work

EDIT: what's the advisory for??? You didn't even use any crude language

Parental Advisory is the name of whatever it is lol..."this takes talent" was just some random name for the post part lol

that was so good.!

simple yet meaningful, i love it :)