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Concrete Dreams
02-17-2004, 07:16 PM
Boredom sets in like a plague
Freedom and memories become so vague
I take a look and hate what i see
that stupid bitch i see is me
At night theres nothing left but whats inside
that ugly truth i mask and hide
Life just sucks, no point to live
You dont understand just what i'd give
to be part of and feel accepted
But in the end im just rejected
I feel like im here, but have no use
But to withstand this abuse
Take me home, I wont look back
The sky tonight is colored black
The darkness scares me and frees my soul
but soon enough i take its toll
Im still trying and dying to know
just where i hid that star in the snow
Im searching and trying to find my life
when it all ends, im left with a knife
To cut the holes out from the seams
to let sun in to shine its beams
on my head to keep me safe
to take me away
so faraway from
this
old
place

Concrete Dreams
02-18-2004, 08:29 PM
did anybody read it?...

Lisa
02-18-2004, 09:09 PM
I read it. It's pretty good...

Sad :(

Tnatum
02-18-2004, 10:27 PM
yup, best i heard in a while.

:x:Amaranth:x:
02-21-2004, 10:30 AM
it was ok

Age_of_Error
02-25-2004, 05:59 PM
I like it.Well done.

Lost Faith
02-25-2004, 06:40 PM
I liked it alot! Very well done.

TootsieRollz25
02-25-2004, 06:56 PM
It was good, the rhyming seemed forced at the beginning but it was still good.

Kenshiro
02-25-2004, 11:02 PM
Yeah it was good, a deeper poem than what I've looked at in a while.