My talentless failure,
A name unrightfully given to you.

With hands that speak to me
Like poetic justice-

Unbelievable,
A spotless failure?

Speak not of talent,
With a body of inspiration.

An imprinted ocean;
Set in eyes with destination.

My relinquished Romeo-
A catalyst to my workmanship.

A poem for my Beautiful Mistake.

Nothing? not even a peep? lol.

i like it, its simple in it context, but has so much meaning....loved it

Thank you

perfection in a mistake? not an original idea, but your poem was original. i really liked it.

for some reason though, while i read it over and over again, the more vivid the image of a mime would be imprinted on my mind. crazy. good work though. :]

*Does a little happy dance*

Simplistic, but beautifully written there, I especially liked
"With hands that speak to me
Like poetic justice-"

Perhaps brush up a little on the Grammar, it seems you have a few commas unnecessarily placed in there. Eg. Unbelievable, - check that, you might not need that there.

Overall Good piece.

Reminds me of beautifull disaster the title... (A Kelly C song)
But anyway nice little poem.