Why do I lie awake
when all the world sleeps?
Why do I cry in bed
When all the world still creeps?
What do I have for you?
I have it in my pocket.
Why can't I see you?
Cause all the world is watching.
I feel that u only cry
only because of me
If all I do is make you die
Tell me that u want to be free.
When all of my lights go out
all you do is laugh
When all my life is faded
you'll only know me in the past.
I feel that I can't stress enough
the glory of our love
I feel that you just don't care
you're as soothing as the dove.
Don't walk away
don't leave me here to die
on second thought, leave me now
you only make me cry

Why do I lie awake
when all the world sleeps?
Why do I cry in bed
When all the world still creeps?
What do I have for you?
I have it in my pocket.
Why can't I see you?
Cause all the world is watching.
I feel that u only cry
only because of me
If all I do is make you die
Tell me that u want to be free.
When all of my lights go out
all you do is laugh
When all my life is faded
you'll only know me in the past.
I feel that I can't stress enough
the glory of our love
I feel that you just don't care
you're as soothing as the dove.
Don't walk away
don't leave me here to die
on second thought, leave me now
you only make me cry

thats good i like that its very touching good poem!
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I thought the line:
"you're as soothing as the doove" Doesn't fit with the poem. It's like you liked that and you just wanted to use it in the poem. But other than that I liked it!