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My New Red Carpet
02-10-2002, 04:33 PM
Alone

Jamie saw a spaceship
but no-one will believe him
It's all imagination
the experts are agreeing
they put him on pills
now they control his mind
he knows what they
want him to know
which is always lies

No-one to trust
it's just you and you
going trough this life
that's attached by glue
Jamie ran away from home
now he's alone
no more doctors, no more pills
no more lies in disguise
he wants people to know
but they won't believe him
it's your imagination
here take this pills
don't be alone

No-one to trust
it's just you and you
going trough this life
that's attached by glue

Lisa
02-10-2002, 04:43 PM
wahey good on you carpet. who wrote that one?

My New Red Carpet
02-10-2002, 04:55 PM
I did.

Unless someone wrote it before, and I just accidently wrote the same thing.

Lisa
02-10-2002, 04:58 PM
lol, that's cool. I've never been able to write poems. Are we acutually meant to post our own poems? I was just going to post the poems that I liked!

My New Red Carpet
02-10-2002, 04:59 PM
I don't think you're forbidden to post your own...

Lisa
02-10-2002, 05:01 PM
eh? I don't have any of my own......

Lost-Conscience
02-11-2002, 11:24 AM
I have many of my own, but I don't think I'll post them. The word disturbing comes to mind. I wrote them a long time ago. =/

Chacotay
02-14-2002, 11:24 PM
did you let someone turn that into a song? i think i've heard it or maybe i've just heard something like it

My New Red Carpet
02-15-2002, 12:20 AM
Originally posted by Chacotay
did you let someone turn that into a song? i think i've heard it or maybe i've just heard something like it

I posted it here once before.
I could probably get someone I know, and who is in a band to do it...

Chacotay
02-15-2002, 12:44 AM
you should, it'd make a great song

demonic_smurf
02-25-2002, 08:44 PM
D00d! I could totally sing that song for you :o okay I probably shouldn't. That would deffinately be a dis. But that poem rawked! Have more cuz if you do I wanna read them.