The wind
It howls
Whistles
Wraps it’s shrieking around my eardrums
Pain
Aching
Make it stop
The noise in my ears
The madness in my head
My brain is swelling with the insanity
My ears ring like a subconscious alarm of danger
They nearly disintegrate from the high-pitch screams
Echoing through the hollow canals
Rattling through my veins
Causing my pulse to cease
My heart misses beats
The chaos inside
Oh god make it stop
My bones rattle
My skin crawls with the pain
The searing pain
It’s everywhere now
The panic runs wild
Fear freezes the marrow in my bones
Make it go away
I’m going crazy
I can’t take it anymore
I open my mouth to form a scream
With one noise I let it all out
All this fear
All this pain
My raised skin separates from the bones
Falls to meet the floor
My bones are triturated to dust
My veins rip themselves open so the blood can finally be set free
My heart and my brain go together at once
Explode to make artwork on the otherwise bare wall
In one scream I release all the tension once and for all

its really good

thanks...does anyone have any suggestions to make it better?

Oh god make it stop - more drama. Eg. Oh God! Make it stop!- Exclamatory sentence perhaps.

Evocative.
Perhaps expand on the images there bring in more detail without it spoiling the rest of the piece, somehow. Maybe use more weather conditions like the 'wind' maybe the 'rain' for tears to conjure up different emotions. Just a thought.

thanks!