Don't want to fuck with the spacing; please visit the link and then bash away. I haven't written anything good in ages, and I'm trying to change that. All comments welcome. Thanks.

www.geocities.com/matthew_f_ferguson/correspondent

didnt like it...sorry...:(

i liked it! Post more..i wanna read em!

i kinda liked it.
im picky about poems

you seemed to just be rambling for a while in there, though.
try organizing your thoughts more and then taking away the unnecessary words/lines