Im gonna do all my poems on this one thread as i write them, saves more room then doing them all on a diffrent one eash time... heres the first

Alone I Stand

I stand alone in millions
millions passing me by
waiting for the moment
when i stand alone no more

I stare out at the distance
nothing so far away
no one stopping to look
or even to see nothings beauty

I wonder about those around
never differing from the path
staying in lines like soldiers
and never thinking more than nothing

I stand in the crowd of many
like a stone in the river
making waves all around me
making no diffrence to the crowd

I stand alone in millions
I stare out at the distance
I wonder about those around
I stand in a crowd of many

Bullet

As i lay among the red grass
I wonder how this happened
and how I'll ever make it through
still knowing no compasion
like he once knew

As i lay among the red dirt
I see into his heart
i realise how bad he was hurt
but still no reason to go this far
and take the life of another

As i lay among my death
I look back on what i did
and wonder could i have done better
but would it be any diffrent
or would i still begin my never ending sleep

As i lay in the darkness of silence
I take one last look in his eyes
looking into a sea of hate
only one thing comes to mind
and with my last breath i begin to say...

In the end we all lay dead
We all lay with bullet wounds
of the body and the mind
never being able to say were sorry
we die with holes never filled

I write poems when i see what someone else has written, i think of it as almost a challenge. Because if i like their topic, and i dont think that they fully captured the spirit of the topic, then i try to better it. I dunno, maybe im just too competitive.

Originally posted by Mr. Magill
I write poems when i see what someone else has written, i think of it as almost a challenge. Because if i like their topic, and i dont think that they fully captured the spirit of the topic, then i try to better it. I dunno, maybe im just too competitive.

na, im just the same, my friend plays something on guitar, i must perfect it...did u like mine though or are you gonna try to out do it?

To be honest, i didn't read yours, and i won't until tomorrow because im going offline now. But i will try my best to read them tomorrow.

lol, thanks for the honesty and i hope u like them when u do read them

i read them....

I read them, they weren't bad. I liked the thought behind them, so keep up the good work. :)

i really like your poems. i especially liked "Alone I Stand" because i can kind of relate to it. i used to write poems, but most of them were really bad lol. oh, and if the Gir in your name is the one i'm thinking of, then you rule :D

i thought they both sucked.

gir is the shizze!!!! I love gir, yes it is what ur thinking, i also draw him too!!

Originally posted by HereComesTheSun*
i thought they both sucked.

thanx for ur opion :D

My New Way

I live in a life of terror
I live in a Life of fear
I live in a time of chrisis
I know not the feeling of pleasure
I know not the joy of love
I do know the only way to live is to be with friends
This I have found is a new way of living
This I have found is a great time of forgiving
This i have found is My New Way

im sorry your just not a good writer...


are you a guy or a girl?

guy, thats kewl, i still like ur opinoin, it makes me try harder next time, and i only write what i feel, and i never said i was good, just felt like sharing

thats cool, i like that you dont get all pissed off when someone says your not good. and i dont know, maybe one day you'll write something i'll love

thats what i wil try my hardest to do, i have a moto i live by, if they dont like what u like, try to like what they like, just for a while, it keeps me from getting pissed :-D

lol nice how old are you?

16

cool

wha bout u??

17

kewl, most say i do act older than i am, i say "Go lick a deers behind!!!!!"

lol, but i love your poems, i cant wait to read more!!

thanx man, more on the way!!

nah i thought you were about 16

Originally posted by Obey_GiR
gir is the shizze!!!! I love gir, yes it is what ur thinking, i also draw him too!!

hell yea, i lurve gir! my friend can draw him really good... i wish i could draw him. but yea, i'm getting off-topic, so i'll shut up lol

dude u gave me my newest idea, im gonna make a gir poem!!!!!

You got some great poems there......I write whenever i get inspired, One day i could write a few poems and then go for a month without writing a single thing, depends on what i'm feeling really.:)

i like them.they were good..

As me move forward in our lives
We lose friends and family
We think we no longer need someone

But we find as we move apart
We really always needed each other
So time take its toll

We drift farther and farther
Never wondering what if
We never parted paths

Would we still be friends?
Would we still be brothers?
So time takes its toll

But as we move on to new friends
We will look back at what we lost
A friendship like no other

We blame lovers, we blame ourselves
We say it's our fault, and theirs
So time takes its toll

As we get older we look back
At the good times and the bad
I'm sad to say it ended

We must move on, we must begin again
But we shall never forget what once was
Time takes a toll on all our lives


Copyright@StonedDevilInc 2004

Can other people post poems as well?

i liked your poems, i could relate to every one very cool!

i need to post more poems :D

Originally posted by Zephyr
Can other people post poems as well?
sure, i like reading everyone eles as well

Never Forever

In between
My heart and my soul
Lies a border no on knows
An endless bond of broken love

Never forever always there
Never forever I don't care
Never forever I miss you
Never forever I'm always there

And endless bounty
Of untainted love
Behind a wall
Of broken lies and mistrust

And endless feeling
Another sleepless evening
And still I miss you all the time
Whether your here or there

Never forever always there
Never forever I don't care
Never forever I miss you
Never forever I'm always there

Now you see what I've become
Another victim of your face
Another meaningless romance
Another love lost forever

I'm never going to be there forever
I'm not going to wait for it to end
I'm never going to be there forever
I'm not going to wait for this to end

Never forever always there
Never forever I don't care
Never forever I miss you
Never forever I'm no longer there...

Never for ever without you...