okay b4 u read, its just the start of a song(notice how sum parts r blank) also i want u to b honest, if it sux, it sux, if its good its good. newaz, its about a time when my life was really goin shitty, my grades were bad, i dumped the girl i liked kuz i was drunk and didnt no ne better so i tried to run away (ending up at the wal mart a couple miles down the road:rolleyes: )

Three miles to nowhere
That’s where I’m goin’
Don’t know how I got here
Or If I belong….

I wont be here much longer
Will you miss me when I’m gone

Im runnin away
From the problems goin on at school
Runnin away
From my parents and their gay ass rules
Im runnin away…..

Four weeks to never
And I miss her so much
I wanted her forever
And I know this now for sure….

My things are packed and ready
Will you miss me when Im gone

Runnin away
From the girl that makes me cry
Runnin today
(thinking of something that rhymes with cry)
Im runnin away

Im already gone
And I don’t think you care
(thinking of another 2-4 lines of interlude)

Runnin away
From my fears and my problems
Runnin away
From things I cant handle
Runnin away
From everything I know
Runnin away
But I want to go home

run away u actually think i willread that

Originally posted by Blindsk8r908

Runnin away
From the girl that makes me cry
Runnin today
(thinking of something that rhymes with cry)
Im runnin away


try....

I just need more time.

good.. i really like the 3 miles to know where..very good

i personally liked the 4 weeks to never line...pretty good..but i didnt like however the school line...ugh...get rid of it

Originally posted by LittleStupidGirl
i personally liked the 4 weeks to never line...pretty good..but i didnt like however the school line...ugh...get rid of it
im tryin to think of more of those kind of lines, i had a bunch of um in my head but cant remember them
yeah i know the school line doesnt flow very well, but im workin on it