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xXxKazukixXx
10-09-2005, 08:35 PM
I am witness to mocking arguments
intellectual suicide
and brain numbing rhetoric

Minds so paralyzed, tangled by their own fear
appear in fine and pressed suits, the morally vested gentlemen
spewing scripted chatter

Tongues thick with convoluted noise of who to hate and who to fear
fingers pointed in righteous disdain
to those who are different
to those who are undeserving

I wait, not for words and lecture, custom or tradition
But to see the corpse’s of the deluded with my own eyes
I wait with knowing certainty—we are alone.

-Eliza Wilson (16-years-old)


(( My best friend wrote this. I loved it, and wanted to share. She's interested in constructive critisim. If you don't agree with her opinions here, then that's fine, just don't flame. It's mean :[ All flames will be printed, and used to line my rabbits cage. Thanks for taking the time to read this! :pink: ))

MuseAris
10-10-2005, 02:04 AM
Your friend is really talented.

PsykoPyro
10-12-2005, 06:57 PM
:D wow your friend is a relly good writer and has strong opinions

thirteen-m-scot
10-13-2005, 06:20 PM
Woo hoo, another poem about suicide, how different.

ssminnow
10-13-2005, 08:30 PM
wow really good i love it

BloodCanticle
10-13-2005, 09:25 PM
Very nice! I loved the way it flowed!

xXxKazukixXx
10-15-2005, 01:49 AM
Woo hoo, another poem about suicide, how different.
Suicide? I think you missed something. =X

Thanks for your comments, everyone. =) She really appreciates them!

goosutoraitaa
10-15-2005, 02:33 AM
I would like to say simply "Wow." Adopt a pseudonym and keep and your friend could be one of the best writers of our generation.

----Goosutoraitaa

xXxKazukixXx
10-16-2005, 12:40 AM
Your comment made her day, Goosutoraitaa. Thank you. :D

fritter_27
10-16-2005, 12:39 PM
that is really good......i like to write about the same stuff because you can put so much power into those types of poems