We live in silent regret
Haunting sinners of every aspect
Kill those still dying by the hand
To release the souls of the damned

So ends the pitiful reign of man
When the moon exhales beyond a veil
Of bitter witchhood that tasted of devile
Remorse in the screams of the
Crowds

Break our walls down
Destroy our empire
Steal our ruins crown
Studded with jewels of blasphemy

Noose hangs as fires turn
Awaiting for the rule to be overturned
Witch’s burn to the stake at ye faithful cross
As we embrace the ashes of our loss

Just wrote this, havn't had time to edit it. Tell me what you think.

its great ill write more soon but i'm about to post a thread x

Pretty good. Some interesting use of phonetic spelling there. Though the flow could be more consistent instead of jagged. First line, second stanza: 'So ends the pityful reign of man' - would be better if you inserted a 'here' in there to make the rhythm more smoother. Perhaps. Just a suggestion.