The rope hangin and the chair kicked out
my body twitching
my minds thinking of wat he did to hurt me
then all the feelings of mine fades
everything i care about dies out
im out of breath, my bodys cold
my muscles are tense
my sight go black
the music playin in the background goes away
then....


i was going through a bad time and wrote this and it got published in a book forget the name right now but...yeah...thoughts of suicide rushed through my head everyday and i wanted nothing more in life and its the same now but im a little more happier...but yeah no one has to commet on it

Im just not for suicide poetry, but i guess its ok. is your display pic from neopets? Oh and just about you feeling suicidle; dont do it, only thoughs who cant cope do that. Its very sad, and surely you wouldnt do that over a guy? Anyway the poems alright

I liked to poem,and don't worry-it'll get better soon-promise!

thanks but no...i dont remember where i gor the picture accually...im not thinking those thoughts anymore because it was all a mix up but i can say that if i would have done it then life would be a whole lot easier on other people...but life is going good now my parents are trying to stick me in counciling but ummmmm NO im not ganna write in a book then leave it at that...lol well thanks bye bye

what the hell?! what kind of stupid assed book did this get published in? man, theyll take anything these days. id be constructive but shit, this just needs deleting. utterley banal.

what the hell?! what kind of stupid assed book did this get published in? man, theyll take anything these days. id be constructive but shit, this just needs deleting. utterley banal.

Hey dumbass, shes writeing her feelings in a book. Nowhere does it sy the poem got published.

Hey dumbass, shes writeing her feelings in a book. Nowhere does it sy the poem got published.

**** yes it does it says it was published in a book and she cant remember the name, dick

So what its better than anything you could ever dream of writin DICK! she has more creative shits than you are!

I think suicidal poetry is okay. I am planning on writing some myself. I've been suicidal since as far back as I can remember. The sad thing is that it's not derived from anything. It's just a constant feeling a depression I carry around everyday. I don't think I'll ever get used it completely but I've vowed that I won't kill myself. If I do, I'll end up in hell and that doesn't serve the purpose.

I like your poem. It's very good. Very emotional. Very fast paced and short so it can be read easily. It's not cluttered with overly dramatic words. It really sounds like it's straight from your heart and you mean what you say in it.

KUDOS TO YOU!!!