the poem in my signature i wrote when i was 12...it's depressing and it sucks but i still feel what i felt when i wrote it. what do you think of it

(not the thing by anna nalick)

hey i liked it, i always have trouble thinking of thing to rhyme w/ words..you used good grammar and you must have a good vocab. too! freakin awesome man! try adding to it, im excited to see something else by you. email me if you have anything else!! keep writing :)

thanksss anyone else?

i liked it, but it seemed kind of distant...maybe i'm just tired though...=) i like the rhyming, it flows well, not choppy and harsh-sounding

Man that rocked! Add to it!!!!!! sent it to me if u do!
Can't wait to read more of your stuff!