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stacey_jo
08-24-2005, 06:45 PM
A real tear.

a real tear is of fear
is of sadness
is of gladness
is of hope
or of madness
but the only real tear i know
is the one that falls when you go


Heaven and hell

there is no heaven
there is no hell
only inbetween

earth is heaven
earth is hell
depending on what youv seen

thats all im putting for now coz i dont know how good they are lol rate them plz
xXx :)

Thoranton
08-24-2005, 07:50 PM
short and sweet.
hard to hate ;)

Atomic_Rooster
08-24-2005, 09:00 PM
... ugh

stacey_jo
08-24-2005, 09:18 PM
thats nice :(

romantic_death
08-25-2005, 10:51 AM
1/10 lol no there good 10/10