it needs a title........ but do u like it?


You left me in the dark
Without a single light
You left me when I needed you most
Just because of one fight
I thought you were different
I thought you really cared
But now I know I was wrong

Now I am trying to find a way
To just smile for one day
It doesn't work to well
I can't find any help
It all left me then
When you told me
You would never talk to me again.

omg I love it... I can relate to that so will... keep it up ur really good

It's okay-ish
work on the wording more, and emphasizing emotion
7/10

awsome! i write poems to! heres a reacent one.

What i am
slut hoe bitch this is wat they think i am like a dieing lonley lamb.
crackhead pillpopper this is my horrible reputation but in the ghetto is a creation this is wat i am.

so many times slapped by mean words so many times my crys were unheard and to this world i have somthing to say, this is wat i am not just for today, but yesturday tommorow, but now and foreverthis is what i am.

in this horrible world, this is where i lay, sombody please take this pain away this is what i am in my world of dismay.

let me live, dont let me die, look deeper into my tearful eye.

let me have a life, befor my wrist is slit with a knife, this is wat i am, not just for today , but yesturday tommorow now and forever. :cry: What I Am

babygurl7 that was a good poem i liked it and thanks everyone!