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stephanie_20
08-08-2005, 10:07 PM
Four Corners

As I stare at the four corners surrounding me
Closing in and suffocating
I can only think of how fortunate I am
Not dying in a land of misery and agony
Just being driven slowly insane, watching the four white corners come closer to me
Seeing shadows dance on the walls, though there is no light nor object for them to come off of
What a painless...effortless way to die...
No struggle, except the one inside the mind..
Here I sit between the four angels of death
Curled up and praying that I don't die, though we all know I deserve it..
Why should I go on breathing, when there are other, more important beings?
I'm taking up their air, I'm their four corners
Suffocation them..
Vision dulls as lungs constrict
I fall softly into sleep..never to awake again..Saving another friend..

xeybrittany
08-08-2005, 10:13 PM
AMAZING wow u have a talent!!!i love it so much its so deep!!!!xoxo keep it up!

ZeppelinKitty
08-08-2005, 10:18 PM
Too much emo and too many ellipses.

That four corners part sounds really familiar, too.... It would have been a good image if you hadn't made it le-emo.

stephanie_20
08-09-2005, 01:42 AM
Give me a break Zep :P I was listening to Weezer all day, how more emo could I get? Much more, but damn. I've run out of razorblades.

AuraBell
08-10-2005, 12:55 PM
What a painless...effortless way to die...
No struggle, except the one inside the mind..
Here I sit between the four angels of death


^^^Loved that.

Emo?
Four corners definitely seemed familiar, but perhaps you could connotate that somehow.

underflyer
08-10-2005, 01:18 PM
I loved it, totally makes you feel all suffocated... "suffocation them"? Did you mean suffocating?
It was really good!
Ellie