I close my eyes,
and let their words run rabid through my head.
"I think he'll make you happy,"
is the phrase that stands out the most.
I hope she's right. I hope he can...
But, has unhappiness gotten the best of me,
and will it ever let go?

I open my eyes,
and take in the world around my body.
"No one is perfect,"
is now the phrase that stands out the most.
I know she's right, but I feel less perfect than most...
I feel unworthy of him, and of his feelings.
Does he know who he cares for?

I open my ears,
and listen to the sounds around me...
"You love me, but you don't know who I am,"
is now the line in a song that stands out the most.
This is how I feel; different.
...And I hope that he can love who I am,
just as much as he loves who he thinks I am.

I close my heart,
and let love pass me by.
I want to forget, and move on...
From the pain and the hurt;
From the phsycotisism of my past;
From the memories, both good and bad;
but, most of all, from the guilt...

God Bless,
Keri :pink:

Thats sad but really good if ya know what i mean and i LOVE that song by 3 doors down!!

I agree, very melancholy but with true meaning.

This is how I feel; different.
...And I hope that he can love who I am,
just as much as he loves who he thinks I am.
^^ Lovely lines these, good detail.

Here:

From the pain and the hurt;
From the phsycotisism of my past;
From the memories, both good and bad;
but, most of all, from the guilt...

Good repetition of the three 'From' , loved the detail here 'phsycotisism of my past'.
Loved it.

Wow! I'm glad you guys liked this one...I wasn't quite sure about it, as at times, I felt as if I was just babbling on about my feelings, and putting them into stanzas...However, I have gotten some good feedback from my close friends as well, so I'm guessing that I did pretty well on this one. I know it is a bit melancholy, but it is all with happy intentions, if that makes any sense. It is about my newest relationship, and how I feel so below him, and unworthy, because, from being used and abused more than once in my past, though I know it's not my fault, I feel guilty, and I never thought that I would ever find someone that treated me as he does; like a princess.

Thanks and God Bless,
Keri