It's the scars that no one sees, the wounds that never heal, the pain no one knows about; that's what hurts the most.
It's the torture you live through every day, the sickening wish for it all to end, death, that's the scariest thing.
It's the only thing you wish for, the only thing you fear, the only thing you wish you never thought of, that's what you dream of.
It's the escape from the torment, the safety net you hope to fall into, the one thing that hurts the most, it's the only thing you run to.

That was deep- I liked it.

Very nice poem.Very deep and full of emotion.

Very good. Well written

that was very well written I loved it. But next time if you have so many poems to post you might want to try putting them all in one thread. Just makes more sense than having amillion different threads.

Ok I will do that from now on. Thankyou. :)

no prob

Oh yeah, that would be really something if you made just one thread and whenever we wanted to read any of your poems, we would know where to look.

Have you ever thought of writing a book full of your poems because I think your very talented.

Thankyou I dont think my poems are very good personally :S

you've got some good parallelism (did i spell that right?? :-/ )..but then you sometimes break the pattern and it really makes the flow harder to follow...also the way you have it arranged makes it difficult to follow..you should hit enter after every comma and distinguish the word death...
just a thought

it made me cry...i like it