View Full Version : Void (tell me what u think of it)
Insomniac-x
11-28-2003, 11:18 AM
Blank, empty, emotionally void
Life has been drained,
My body destroyed.
Too weak to sleep, physically dead
Mind running circles,
Seeking an end.
Anger, rage, mentally insane
Tears falling faster,
Unconscious again.
Built up fire, passion ignited
Fury dripping from me
That's not worth fighting
Primus
11-28-2003, 11:21 AM
:/ Good, but don't do what I think this is about.
Insomniac-x
11-28-2003, 11:23 AM
Dont worry im not quite ready for that yet
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Her face looking down, smiling at me
Her eyes are lost in the fantasy dream
Fading inside her; the breath in her soul
A cloud in her brain where her mind once though
A hole in her heart where love used to be
Falling away, spiraling into death
Bleeding in pain, crying to me for help]
A knife to her wrist, knowing not what she does
A blood red cry, that she knows nothing of.
Primus
11-28-2003, 11:27 AM
Aim?
Insomniac-x
11-28-2003, 11:28 AM
Aim?
xangelx_of_xdarknessx@hotmail.com (if u have msn) or u can just email me if u want 2 :D
Primus
11-28-2003, 11:37 AM
Bah, I only have AIM.
BeastieBoys2006
Insomniac-x
11-28-2003, 11:40 AM
owell! i`ll b on here everyday so i guess we can talk on here :)
Age_of_Error
11-28-2003, 04:31 PM
Another emotion filled poem.I like this.Good Work.
.Polyamorous.
11-28-2003, 11:21 PM
I love ur work! You put so much emotion into each poem. Keep writing ur really good.
Insomniac-x
11-29-2003, 04:59 AM
Thankyou for all the kind comments you've said about my Poems. I don't think they are good myself. But they help me express my emotions. I will try and write some happier ones if these are 2 depressing tho. :)