View Full Version : Heres a poem I wrote. A Year.
FunniLiLHunni
07-26-2005, 01:28 PM
Its been a year and things have changed. You've moved on but sadly I've stayed the same. I've been sitting her for this long sad lonley year thinking if you ever really loved me, if so then why dear did u do this to me and hurt me so? Then say you felt bad and understand and know. Well if you loved me then you would of talked to me and let me know as of now as of this day I'm letting you go and I'm not gonna cry over you for one more single day!
Good Bye
Corey
:cry: :pink:
AuraBell
07-26-2005, 04:50 PM
Awwwwwww. Melancholy.
:(
Slightly blue, but good content of emotion.
DragonIreth
07-26-2005, 05:05 PM
aww.. that's sad
talented_fighter
07-26-2005, 05:12 PM
its good work. it all runs great together. keep up the good work.
xoxoxoxoxoxo
shy baby girl
FunniLiLHunni
07-26-2005, 06:30 PM
thanks for all the feed back!!
danielle_ilovebj
07-26-2005, 06:53 PM
I think its awesome
Dani
Pansy_Girl
07-26-2005, 11:01 PM
Omg that is sad but good if ya know what I mean. :cry:
oombadaga
07-26-2005, 11:45 PM
agreed... very sad indeed... good poem as well ^.^... hope things work out with this... corey... person ^.^