I thought you said you loved me
I thought when you held me tight
and swore you'd never let go
you meant it
the way you made me feel
like I was the only one that mattered
like I was the most special, the most beautiful
the way you kissed me tenderly
and made me belive that
chivalry still existed
but you threw it all away
this love we had so real
for a love that was nothing but counterfit
it was over in a flash
and then you lied to me about it.
What ever happened to us?
What did I do that made you change your mind?
Now we're in this limbo
that we'll stay in for awhile due to
lack of communication
what am I supposed to do until then?


What do you think? any other suggestions for a title?

Very nice poem! :)

I always think most of your poems are groovy. You could call it limbo. But that's not really what the poem is about.

I didnt like it. The flow isnt right.