Note: Unfinshed/unorganized song



Chorus~
How can you overcome what's already been done
These faces all washed away by tears of horrid
Undying disasters unfold
They unfold oh oh oh they've unfold
An engraved pain no one can hold
Not even the naked eye can deny what's arrived
Ah Ah Ah tonight no it's arrived


Verse #?:
A world drenched in sorrow
For fear of what comes tomorrow
A boy left all alone
In a childhood-murder zone
With nothing to remain
But a sea filled with our pain
It's nothing to be shamed
But something lives shall reframe

cool how you wrote about the tsunami, but would be better if it was finished, which I know you didn't. Hope you do.

blah... needs substance, structure.. if it was for the Tsunami it needs to actually express ideas that are related to that event.. all your expressing are water or flood related ideas... needs work but your on the right track!! keep it up

hey nancee!! tis meh!! lol yeah...i thinks its good...want me to add sum stuff to it?? tells meh and i will k? k.

yes sawa. i needs you to add some shiz to it. i already told you to. cause i wants the whold Crash N Burn to take part in it.

blah... needs substance, structure.. if it was for the Tsunami it needs to actually express ideas that are related to that event.. all your expressing are water or flood related ideas... needs work but your on the right track!! keep it up

Agreed.