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blade_skin_suicide
07-04-2005, 02:47 PM
Isolation
My own little wall
Built of lies
To shelter me from the world
I say Im fine
My wall grows
I say Im happy
And plaster a smile on my face
My wall grows
My wall of lies
Keeps getting taller
I tell you Im not depressed
You can see it in my eyes
That its all a lie
I tell you I can make it through
And my wall grows
I say these things
To calm you down
I dont want you to worry
Dont want you to see
That other side of me
The isolation drags me down
Yet I love it
It gives me hope
It sheilds me from everyone
I cant let them see
That side of me
That side that cant hold on
The part thats slipping away
The side thats falling over the edge
That side cant be revealed
It stays isolated
Surrounded by the walls
The walls of lie and tears
The wall built because of fear
Fear that someone may someday know
How I truly feel
Deep inside
Beyond my walls
Walls of lies
Walls for isolation
My walls come tumbling down

babygurl_Tay
07-04-2005, 04:16 PM
Sarah that is deep.... I like it. Maybe one day you will be able to show how you truly feel and not feel bad. Maybe we both will be able to do that.

blade_skin_suicide
07-04-2005, 04:19 PM
Thankx Tay

babygurl_Tay
07-04-2005, 04:23 PM
No problem.:)

anime_fan113
07-04-2005, 08:29 PM
Your really good! ^-^

newmoon07777
07-05-2005, 12:44 PM
WOW. I loved it so far on the boards i think you are the best writer. Wish you luck hope you can change the world. Or at least how people think.




Love stinks he wears to much colonge ;]

blade_skin_suicide
07-05-2005, 05:14 PM
Thanks so much. I really worry about what people will say to my poetry but so far I have gotten mostly positive responses. Thank you so much

darkfaerie
07-05-2005, 07:22 PM
omg...could this poem describe me any more? it's like exactly something i would write...only it's GREAT instead of shitty...lol,anyway, keep up the good work!