i wrote this fho my homegurl fate who be goin thru baby momma truma shit and so yea

lookin into
brown eyes
i gave
my all in all
now you leavin
cuz you
you aint have
time to call
hes your son too
or did you forget
when she came
and you put
all blame
on me
sayin i
changed
so we cud neva be
when you claimin
she ya wifey
keep it to yaself
i say when
you come
wrong out
ya mouf
then i blow up
cuz you cursin storms
in my house
but you
jus dont care
so leave
it dont matter
cuz you aint neva
been here
i wont raise
him
hating you
you did that
for yaself
growin up
seein daddy
cheat on momz
with some1 else
you crazy
if you thinkin
i dont need
your help
hes your seed
i dont even want
your money
jus come see
him for yaself
hes so precious
i wanna give
him the world
he already
pimpin
pullin little girls
its crazy
that at 1st
you aint neva
wanna be
with me
then y
*** home
after you cheat
i jus want you
to take care
of your
responsibilities
if you
cant stand me
then we dont have
2 speak
jus come home
and help
raise our kid
i refuse
to let him
grow up
the way
you & i did
man enuff
to put ya dick in
but not man enuff
to hold ya kids hand
you selfish
or maybe
its me
i doubt it
but still you
dont see
its fate's fate
to be great
even if
we dont make it
he wont eva
have to make
his own way
the roads paved
he just needs
a guidin light
to lead the way
but you refuse
to help me do right
it all good
i dont hate you
cuz you gone
always be you
do wat you do
when you get time
maybe
you can roll thru
sooner or later
maybe youll see
you missed out
on 1st days
of wat will *** 2 be

While reading this cut, I thought to myself: ''why don't ya sign up to Def Poetry Jam contests all around this itty-bitty planet?" C'mon, you'd rock the moshpit out dem cleatz!

i went to go see Def Jam poetry and trust it they hella betta than me

It's just not my thing. I don't know. I don't relate. I'm sorry. I think, as a subject, and the way you betrayed it, I did find myself there. But being from the Mid-West, and being a small town girl, I can't really get into that. Not to diss you or anything. It's just not my thing.

i liked it. you're really good at writing

Very good, haven't been there but understand. Please, do me a favor, correct spelling and grammar, pLeAsE!

Krissy32: alrighty
blade_skin_suicideL thanxs
stephanie_20: *pfft* i said this once i'll say it agian i write that wat cuz i dont wanna fhoget wat im tryin to write so im not gonna change it

id read if i understood, im only trained to read in the english language, not this abomination of letters thrown together.

goodguy: thats good fho u

If only the baby mamas on my street could read your poem it would change their lives.

babygurl_Tay: oh

tight