Doctor, my brother is not well.
Why things are wrong I cannot tell.

Dear boy it seems he has fallen ill.
Why, here take this wonderful pill.

But doctor, you don't know of the symptoms he has.
I'm worried, and his health is declining fast.

He will need this pill to cease his pain, you see.
Here my child, take this drug and count to three.

One
Two
Three

Ah my boy, your brother is cured!
See how your worries were quite absurd?

Why, he has gotten worse! You are bound for jail!
He still quivers, but now he has become pale!

My boy, haven't you read the sign on the door?

Welcome to the White House Hopsital. "Helping the rich and killing the poor."

it was clever up till the end.... it makes sense but its not a witty end.

Eh. Nasty. Not a witty ending I would agree. Seems amusing up til then.

This I liked:
Ah my boy, your brother is cured!
See how your worries were quite absurd?

Even though it half-rhymed.


Here

He still quivers, but now he has become pale! - Should it be an exclamation mark? I would've thought more of a fullstop but oh well..

Rather exaggerated on the 'wondeful pill'.

Likewise, clever but I thought the ending was just a varified version of Robin Hood's ''Robbing the Rich and giving to the poor.''

i liked it a lot.
agree with the corny ending.