generations have felt the fear
the fear of the loved one held so dear
fear of the monster unleashed inside
behind those sad- kind eyes
fear for their saftey
fear for their love
fear for their young impressionable hearts
fear that they are sa no good as the monster says
fear of the object in its hands
you look in it's eyes and see the loved one
look in it's eyes and fall for it's spell
for these are the things that are to be feared
there has never been as real or as fierce
there has never been a crimnal as hurtful and wrong
fear the monster that is inside and stop this fear from coming alive :cry:



[COLOR=DarkRed]this poem was a semi-finalist in a world wide poetry contest. it is my orignal work and is copywritted

some one rate this please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Eh. I would say 6.5/10. 'sad-kind eyes' = liked that. Could do with some more pre-modifying adjectives which give colour! But on the whole, it was okay, a change from most of the poems on here. It has emotions in here, maybe too many of them. Its a tad short for my taste. But on the whole, 6.5/10.

thanks it is really personal

its alright, i guess i dont lik it as much as u b/c it didn't hit me at such a personal note. 6.75/10, but good job! -Jen

thanks some one else please rate like i said it was editors choice in a world wide poetry contest