I cry myself to sleep
Thinking of all the things
The pain you put me through
And how your love would be a dream

With every blow to my body
My anger for you grows
I wanna leave
I wanna get out
But I know I've gotta be strong

I've gotta be strong
So she can live happy
And I've gotta be brave
So she knows it's alright

I'm tired of shedding tears
Because of the pain I'm in
But this is my life
I have to live it the way it is

I wanna believe you love me
I wanna believe you care
I just want things to be normal
But that day will never come

I want to come home
To a loving embrace
I want you to hug me
And say, It's gonna be okay

But that's all just a dream
An unattainable reality
She lives in my dreamland
Why can't i come in?

Why am I your punching bag
And outlet for frustration?
Am I really that bad?
Do I truely deserve it?

Don't you remember the days
When we used to go outside and play?
You'd push me in the swing
My laughter would fill the air

I'm the one that gave your life meaning
That made you smile when you were down
That fell asleep in your arms
I'm the one

So why is it now
When I'm all grown up
You can't find it in your heart
To show me a little love

I know things change
And life isn't fair
One thing I'd thought stay the same
Was that your love for me
Would always be there

But I was wrong...
I was never your Daddy's little girl
And I never will be!

Nice....very strong and sad.... Like mine thou its quite simple...

thanx for the feedback

No problemo

'twas aight
could make a few improvements with ur stanzas and wording

very great!
not to many big or complicated words!
small words all understandable!
i loved it!
good job!

Good. :) No faults. Its good.

hmm..it could do very much with a little more imagery.all in all it was ok.