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Coyote66
05-15-2005, 09:58 PM
The earth breaks before us.
Stone is wrenched apart.
Trees topple.
A howling wind awakens. Leaves part before it’s infinitesimal rage. Any living thing bends at the ferocity of it.
And yet we two stand - undaunted.
The howling wind with rage of infinitesimally only flutters our cloaks and our hair sway in the wind.

With the land fracturing around us we stand ready.
Plains, forests, mountains, swaps and seas disintegrate.
We stand ready.
Ready to fight.
Not for right or wrong, virtue or malice, God or Satan, land and country, hearth and home.
We fight as equals, as comrades, as friends.
We fight this fight to live.
For this is happiness.
Not money. Not control. Not mastery, dominance, command, ascendancy or supremacy.
For happiness is the thrill.
The thrill of emotion.
The thrill of life.
The thrill of living.
The thrill of being alive.

Her hair plays in the wind as she smiles at me.
I smile back, relaxed and at peace with the failing world.

We draw swords. Steel rings against steel creating that musical note.
Our swords are flashes, barely noticeable.
Our feet move in a pattern that only battle can create.
In a sense we dance.
With flurries and parries we twirl about one another.
As sword meets sword we test each other’s strength and find nothing wanting.

She smiles.

Her blade skates down mine to stop at the hilt.

With a flick of her wrist my sword goes spiralling into the air to embed itself into the ground.
As I bow she laughs aloud.
I retrieve my blade and we both walk to the cliff to look out at the land below.

As we look at the fractured land below we feel sorry for those who have created it. For they live trapped, wanting power, money and control.
As we walk away I reflect at how easy it is to reach out and obtain enjoyment from life. All I have to do is accept.

Kanako
05-15-2005, 10:05 PM
I have to say that as i began to read this i saw it in my head... which is a very good thing to have happen, espically if someone is aiming for that intense imagery which it appears you were. Some people might not quite grasp your meaning of it, but i think it's more important that they grasp some meaning from it.... If you would care to enlighten me as to what you were thinking of when you wrote this, i would very much appreciate it, sometimes i find the thoughts behind the poetry just as good as the end product....

Coyote66
05-16-2005, 09:49 PM
If you would care to enlighten me as to what you were thinking of when you wrote this
I was wondering at my amazing ability to just go 'OK this has happened to me' and just go on. And even if it initialy upset me I get over it very quickly. After the initial upset I just feel better for no reason. I just "accept" it. I was also thinking of my philosiphy: Live life cause lifes worth living. Also I was thinking of how nice it would be to have a girlfriend. ummm. There might have been other stuff but I can't remember it clearly.

Kanako
05-16-2005, 10:19 PM
well thankyou very much that sheds more light on it

Coyote66
05-17-2005, 10:03 PM
My pleasure