faeng_morality
05-15-2005, 10:23 AM
I loved you more than you could ever know
My devotion, my heart, how it sickened me so
Knowing that I could never have you and yet
You were always there in front of me so perfect
My angel to innocent and pure as the moonlights glow
And it tore my organ pumping vibrant in my throat
All the ligaments chocked and fell
And he stabbed me knowing it was not just infatuation
That my love fore you was slaughtering me though I would never tell
Do you dream my love, and do you remember?
The night I held you deep within my arms
Your face was half-dead yet twisted with genial devotion
And your broken body poisoned my eyes, and diseased me slow
The finest fairest pain was my sorrow alone
And though he wished to see me kill you bleed you for my pain
Your innocence drenched me in sickness
So I cut myself to feed his starvation and drenched myself in a crimson rain
For I hated you to dearly, and my love for you so tainted
And though I could taste your bruised lips
I would never perish your ever sweet soul
And I cannot hide these eyes that stare after you from me
While all everyone sees is my hatred for you
I’d pray a thousand tears for you to never recall that night
He stabbed you to the point of death
And I caressed you with an unrequited and weakened heart
The image of you naked and abandon caked me in a blackened breath
And oh how I loved you so
The one being I could never have, and never wanted him to know
Oh how I still do love you so
For eternity though you may one day remember that night we were together
Dragonflies screech and die, flowers bleed their petals dry
And it sickens me to know as he stabbed once lasting time unto my flesh
The crimson paintcups peeling in a creamy mesh
Oh how I still do love you so.
-Race Back (Faeng_Morality)
*this i wrote and it makes me kind of sick no really sick, but i like it never the less, though i think i could have done a bit better on describing the situation...please critique and tell me how many mistakes i made on this piece :sadwave:
My devotion, my heart, how it sickened me so
Knowing that I could never have you and yet
You were always there in front of me so perfect
My angel to innocent and pure as the moonlights glow
And it tore my organ pumping vibrant in my throat
All the ligaments chocked and fell
And he stabbed me knowing it was not just infatuation
That my love fore you was slaughtering me though I would never tell
Do you dream my love, and do you remember?
The night I held you deep within my arms
Your face was half-dead yet twisted with genial devotion
And your broken body poisoned my eyes, and diseased me slow
The finest fairest pain was my sorrow alone
And though he wished to see me kill you bleed you for my pain
Your innocence drenched me in sickness
So I cut myself to feed his starvation and drenched myself in a crimson rain
For I hated you to dearly, and my love for you so tainted
And though I could taste your bruised lips
I would never perish your ever sweet soul
And I cannot hide these eyes that stare after you from me
While all everyone sees is my hatred for you
I’d pray a thousand tears for you to never recall that night
He stabbed you to the point of death
And I caressed you with an unrequited and weakened heart
The image of you naked and abandon caked me in a blackened breath
And oh how I loved you so
The one being I could never have, and never wanted him to know
Oh how I still do love you so
For eternity though you may one day remember that night we were together
Dragonflies screech and die, flowers bleed their petals dry
And it sickens me to know as he stabbed once lasting time unto my flesh
The crimson paintcups peeling in a creamy mesh
Oh how I still do love you so.
-Race Back (Faeng_Morality)
*this i wrote and it makes me kind of sick no really sick, but i like it never the less, though i think i could have done a bit better on describing the situation...please critique and tell me how many mistakes i made on this piece :sadwave: