Out from the mountain, To reach the ocean
I need no reason, Only the motion
Flow into nowhere And wash away the lies
I've no fear of losing
What you see is not mine
For I leave no footprints
On the sands of time
I only witness And trust in my own source
Like all rivers do, Running the course
Bleeding in deeper To reach the lowest ground
I've no fear of losing
What you see is not mine
For I leave no footprints
On the sands of time
Out from the mountain, Reaching the ocean
Know that you'll meet me From all directions
As the final curtain Falls before your eyes

Im proud of u! i like ur poem! from ur coolest friend allison lol

This feels like the words to a song. My first reading made me want to bash it, my second made me want to put music under it. I think this poem shows a significant amount of talent. Lines 8 and 9 are really awkward, and should probably each be broken up into two seperate lines and retooled to tfit the flow of the poem. Solid.

thnak you