My existential expeditions
are one part care-free
per two parts catastrophe

Open to interpretations
I’ve been burdened by humility
to embrace my individuality

opposites make equal sensations
& weightlessly weave harmonies
of realities & reveries.

I just made it up, & it makes sense. ( well i get it anyway)


Some of you folks may need a dictionary for this one though.

For me it has a few meanings, rather good but odd in the way it is presented, well a good poem though!

to me it sounded more like a quote. still i thought it was ok none the less

How would anyone need a dictionary for that?

I couldn't really get any image from it, so maybe go into more detail of what these "existential expeditions" would be. I think that often in poetry, you have to both make your point and illustrate your point in order for the reader to get anything out of it.

Certainly illustrate the points, but perhaps analyse it in different ways as well.

well it was good no doubt about it, i believe poems dont always need imagery sometimes its just logic but.. i dont know something is missing. i dont know what so i cant really help sorry :S and i agree, i would not need a dictionary; i dont think much people would. anyhoo work on it. My suggestion is keep on version like this and make another one with more imagery like play with it see where it takes you
keep it up