I want ya'll to rate how you think i am as a writer 1-10. please be honest. most of these poems were written when in was depressed and i felt that i should out it into words.

In the End

I close my eyes
And slowly drift away
To a place inside
Where I wish I could stay

I see you in the distance
In a field if dreams
Of what life used to be
Or so it seems

I feel light headed
When I see your face
I cannot breathe
My heart seems to race

I wish to hold you in my arms
And feel your warmth again
But now I truly know
I won’t have you in the end

Better Than Me

When I’m with you my life seems true
I wish somehow you would love me too
But I can’t change your mind on a whim
It killed me when you said you wanted him

When I’m with you my heart feels warm
To be with you is to be reborn
Now that you’re gone my life is dark
When you left me you left your mark

Others no as much about you as a new car
I know about you for who you really are
I have seen you, inside and out
I know everything that you are about

I wish we could start over in a new place
So that I may once again see your happy face
I hope you are happy with the one that you see
Because I can’t help that he’s better than me

NEVER QUIT

In the past year I have learned
The best things in life must be earned
The same things that make me laugh make me cry
It never fails to bring a tear to my eye

People say life is a good as gold
I think that it can get pretty old
But still I will keep on fighting
It can sometimes be some what exciting

One day it will be my child’s turn
To grow and flourish like a fern
To find the real meaning of life
And find that some roads lead to strife

I have run into things that remind me of my past
It makes me wonder why these feelings last
Some say what doesn’t kill you makes you stronger
I think that I don’t want to be strong any longer

But still I will never decide to quit
I won’t wonder in that direction in the littlest bit
For there is no guarantee of what my future holds
But I pray I’m not alone and no longer cold


i hope you enjoy. this is only a few of the many that i have written. please tell me what you think.

thay r good u must spend all ur time wrien them they r brilliant ty for posting them

there ok.. needs work though

i like the first 1 the other1's were ok but i'm not 1 4 luv poems anyways. you could try and brach out and maybe write some non ryming, but you have a pretty good talent 4 ryming wich i really reaspect in a writer cuz i can't rymae at all!!!
keep up the good work! :)