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livenotletdie
04-22-2005, 07:55 PM
Just one Kiss

Just a taste of your lips
Would be most divine.
Just to look into your eyes
As our fingers entwine.

To feel your heart beat
Upon my skin,
Would make me go crazy,
Yet make my world spin

To have my fingers
Trace your lips
As they play a smile
Upon my fingertips.

To see the desire
Burning in your eyes,
Is like the desire
Relected in mine.

To feel your lips on mine,
And i'm lost in sweet bliss.
As we begin our journey of love
With just one kiss.

AussieAngel07
04-22-2005, 07:58 PM
Very good, i like how it ryhmes!

F0rG0tt3n_T34rz
04-22-2005, 11:11 PM
omg... i love that. its so pure. it has a good flow. good job. :)

angel
04-23-2005, 11:29 AM
its deep i like it
carisxxxxxxxxxx

breakdancerqt
04-23-2005, 11:32 AM
its so good!!!! u should get a patten on that or w/e its called. someone on here might steal it. i think its so good!!!!!!!

livenotletdie
04-23-2005, 11:58 AM
lol. thanks guys

AuraBell
04-23-2005, 01:14 PM
mmmmm. It flows good, yes I agree. Have you ever strayed beyond relationship-like poems.? It would be interesting to see other explorations of subjects from you.