Enjoy.


Snatched From Reality

The reflection is fuzzy,
And my vision is blurred
A shape materializes,
Its wielding brightness
Astoundingly dazzling.

Disconnected, I lie
Snatched from reality,
Wondering where I am
Desolated by this revelation,
Listening to the whispers
Of the non-existent people

In this area, they linger
A long way away from home,
Welcoming fellow spirits whom
Have travelled from afar.

Arctic chills smother the air,
Penetrating through my heart
Profound emotions locked within my soul,
Chained

The hoary outline emits its energy flare,
Leaving me confused
In the spur of a moment;
Assurance services not needed
Traces of evidence invisible

Their auras, still toying
On the tip of my tongue as
I stretch towards the vacant space
Justifying my knowledge
Extinguishing the belief that
My imagination is tricking me.

i like your poem

I liked it!!!!

very good. i think its great.
very vivid and imaginative.

very good. i think its great.
very vivid and imaginative.

Thx all :) Anyone else care to comment? Heh

Meee! I have something to say...

I love the way you make your poems flow... which is pretty hard sometimes seeing as you put a lot of detail into it. :rolleyes: Love your work -keep it up! :D

Meee! I have something to say...

I love the way you make your poems flow... which is pretty hard sometimes seeing as you put a lot of detail into it. :rolleyes: Love your work -keep it up! :D

:) ty! Making poems flow for me, as you can see, I find it rather easy ^_^ Though its hard to think of a subject to base poems on, thats what I find hard unless an thought comes suddenly into meh head :)