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cassiesteele42
04-10-2005, 10:35 AM
You took chances
Once too many times.
As a child you thought -
"Oh no, never me."
Life is a gift,
Given and taken at some
Unknown time.
Your time came too soon -
Your life was over in a flash.
The fun you shared,
The joy you brought,
All just a memory -
Behind us.

BuzzyBee
04-10-2005, 04:44 PM
cute i guess

BuzzyBee
04-10-2005, 04:47 PM
by the way the title doesnt fit with the poem, i mean if your gonna give something a title, like yours with the title there should be some element of confusion in the poem but there is none.. different title and less long would help... also why so many poems that all sound the same all at the same time with titles that sound all just about to be the same thing, word of advice: titles! because of the titles it makes your poem sound like a chain letter you know those sad ones you get all the time, unless thats what you want...