My heart...
You torment me and I've yet to see
the light you breath
my smile dissipates
a life you'd leave
and I realize I've yet to speak
as I plead
will you stay just a moment more
will you...
my soul feels warm next to yours
your touch blinds me from these dreams
the words you say
as this rain pours from my eyes
I've yet to breath a day without your love
even now...if heaven has found us
you'd be the stone that drowns us
I've yet to breath a day without you
as you illuminate
my sky seperates
I've yet to breath
and you are the same thorn that
makes my heart bleed

You know the last sentence makes you sound Scottish with the "me", my would have been better.

It's cool, this ones more emotional though,

I meant to type "my" lol

EDIT: I'll fix it now.

hahaha. wow. when I read it and it said "me" instead of "my" I laughed so hard...wow...just wow..


anyway it's very emotional. awesome. I loved it.