Forgive the sun who didn't shine
The sky had asked her in to dine

Forgive the stars that heard your wish
The moon prepared there favourite dish

Forgive the rain for its attaack
The clouds have tears they can't hold back

Don't hate the birds cause they are free
Don't envy all the things you see

Don't block the wind but hears it crys
Our else the wind will pass you by

Forgive the storm it means no harm
Could not resist to show its charm

Forgive the earth that never turns
Din't hate the sun because it burns

Life intends to not cause pain
The flowers bloom from all the rain

The storm will come and then pass
The sun that shines it grows the grass

The wind it cannot help but cry
The stars at night light up the sky

Forgive the worl which we live in
Will all find peace if we forgive

I luvvvvvvvvvvved it . Great poem i thought this was truly awsome. It could really turn up in a book if you could change some of the words like cry bcuz u used it twice even if it had an s on one of them. Revise it a little. But wow this is some serious nature poetry.

*Claps*
Brovo... Keep writeing
and I'll keep reading...

Once again another great poem

Thats really awesome.. well done!

but hunny..
http://www.mamarocks.com/can_you_forgive.htm

and ok, you could say yes.. i am Danielle Rosenblatt, but.. another post of yours is ... here..
http://www.teenspot.com/boards/showthread.html?t=154372
and that poem is actually written by Jessica Leonard.
http://hometown.aol.com/__121b_KD0XaG1AM6QB3XGdkttTKxpu48RMFcBb9Nif57wfNZ3/SI7xbZridg
So yes, theyre beautiful poems, and credit should be given to the actual poet, and not to you.

Faker.

i loooooooved it it is awsome

Plagiarism is a BIG no-no, sweetie.

^ :iagree:

This *hardly* the place for plagerism. Lack of god.....